Mrs. Johnson is not only a teacher but also a mother whose daughter is so sick. She was so tired that she has to get up to take care of her daughter several times in the whole night. When Mr. Johnson finished work coming home in the morning, they discussed the situation about their daughter and decided to have an operation for her. Mr. Johnson said it will be ok but Mrs. Johnson was worried about every thing. In a little while, Mrs. Johnson still went to the school although she was late. She felt sad because she has to hand in the report when leave. And she was mad with her students were noisy and don’t do their homework. Ronnie, one of the students who didn’t do homework, said that there were many troubles in his house. Mrs. Johnson thought it is the excuse so she asked Ronnie to see vice-principal and learned a lesson. When he meets his friend Frank in the hall Ronnie said “I don’t know what happen to Mrs. Johnson. All I did was not having my homework and she flipped. These teachers sure don’t understand.”
Nowadays, many women have two statuses, one is mother and the other is her career. Compare with housewife, they have more work and responsibility to do. Career woman came back to home when finish working, they have to cook for family, do the house work and take care the children. Instead of doing these works, all they want doing is might take the rest or doing some entertainments. Without the way to deal with the stress, it is possible to hurt their body and affect their mood or temper.
In the story, the part I have a stirring of emotion is Mrs. Johnson started to cry. She was tired and depressed. She was worried about her daughter, her husband’s job and the relationship between them. In fact I think that my mother is also concern for the business and her children like Mrs. Johnson. My mother ever cried in the midnight but didn’t tell us about the bitters of live. But I know that and try to do some thing to assist her work. Besides, I hope that my mother can relaxed herself and to be optimize. She will have more happiness.
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Hello,my dear
Sorry for the late common.
It's hard time for woman to paly two roles in a family. All of us have to help our mother to do the housework, and make them more relax at home.
I think the paragraph 3, line 8 "bittes", would make people don't understand what you want to talk about. Maybe you can change it into "promlems". It's a common word, but I think that can represent the meaning more clearly.
Your writing becomes more smoothly. Well done.
Yurong
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